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ButterflyFairy
03-10-2009, 01:28 PM
Hey guys, I have created a documentry for my media studies project, and now I need to collect feedback for my evaluation, so what im proposing is that you guys watch it, then give me some good and bad feedback (Be honest, I dont care how bad your feedback is, I need bad feedback to write about :lol:).

By the way, I know the audio goes in and out of sync at around 3-5mins, so please dont mention that, it was somthing to do with exporting it messing it up, but it will be fixed soon :thumbsup:

Heres the video:

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Cheers! :thumbsup:

Lokela
03-10-2009, 03:16 PM
Over all, you did a fair job. I liked how you kept some of his music playing as he was talking, and how you used footage from a recent show. I think that you could've left the pictures up, that you cut to while he was talking, a little longer. They seemed to flash by to quick. Also, I'm not sure what was going on during the 3min. - 4:30min. I had a hard time understanding what was said. The guys voice sounded a little muffled. I did like how the documentary was kept brief, and not long and drawn out.:thumbsup:

ButterflyFairy
03-10-2009, 03:50 PM
Over all, you did a fair job. I liked how you kept some of his music playing as he was talking, and how you used footage from a recent show. I think that you could've left the pictures up, that you cut to while he was talking, a little longer. They seemed to flash by to quick. Also, I'm not sure what was going on during the 3min. - 4:30min. I had a hard time understanding what was said. The guys voice sounded a little muffled. I did like how the documentary was kept brief, and not long and drawn out.:thumbsup:

Thanks man :thumbsup: Ill bear the pictures and that in mind, although im never making another documentry again :lol:

levi95psn
03-10-2009, 05:14 PM
Can't view it on my iTouch:(

Artemas
03-10-2009, 06:12 PM
I don't think I can say something bad about it. Very nice editing and sound, etc. Over all I thought it was very well done (Like how in depth I got?:lol:)


Interesting topic though, not bad by any means either.:thumbsup:

ButterflyFairy
03-11-2009, 11:55 AM
I don't think I can say something bad about it. Very nice editing and sound, etc. Over all I thought it was very well done (Like how in depth I got?:lol:)


Interesting topic though, not bad by any means either.:thumbsup:

Thanks, I do like how indepth you got, you should totally be a review guy or somthing :lol: :thumbsup: